What was your name again?

I am going back to tackle a manuscript that I've been away from for quite some time.  I started reading the last few paragraphs to get myself immersed back in the scene, and I'm thinking, "oh yeah, this is good..."

So I pick up with the heroine talking, and she says, "You look like a desperate man, Mr. —"

"Mr. ?"
"Mr. ummm ?"
"Mr. ehhhh?"
"Mr. — Dude, what was your name again?"

Okay, obviously I've been away from the book for some time. I can't remember the lead character's last name!


  1. Hope you figured it out! Can't wait to read it. :-)


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